I give good notes

Hey babe, are you working on a script that you want some feedback/help on? I am offering my script consulting services for a custom fit fee.

Is the tone not toning? Do you need a hand with structure, character, visual storytelling, gags, etc…. As well as being an award winning comedian, I am a development producer. I have plenty of experience giving notes on scripts, treatments and ideas. I love developing people’s writing talent and helping them hone their craft.

I can offer creative assistant from the eyes of producer, writer and performer. I love helping people realise their projects full potential and turn really good ideas into really good scripts.

I work do custom fit fees depending on the project and also offer subsidised services for low income, marginalised clients.

Testimonial

Alex Bertules Fernandes - comedian and writer

“I asked Mary for feedback on a sitcom script I was struggling with. Her feedback was prompt, thorough and insightful. Mary was able to identify issues with my script that I had not been able to articulate, as well as identify other elements with room for improvement. Feedback is clear, constructive and dispassionate, but delivered by someone highly personable who knows what they're talking about. Mary has excellent comedy instincts, and I really benefited from her unique insight as someone who works both as a comedy writer and in development. She has a wealth of knowledge of how the process works from both sides, and this is reflected in her feedback. I would wholeheartedly recommend working with Mary and will be using her for future projects.”

Chris Donovan - comedian and writer

"Mary's notes were so in depth and thought through. Her experience of actually working in development meant she was able to appraise my script from a professional standpoint and showed me where to improve my script. She's objective, friendly and wants the script to be the best it can be, a writer's dream! I'll definitely be coming back to her."